The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table demonstrates the contribution of various computer companies to the economy of the
share
market for the years 2006 and 2007 including 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
HP
company holds the highest market value
all
throughout the period followed by the Dell brand. Correct determiner usage
apply
However
, a wide range of variations and fluctuations were listed with other organisations.
In the year 2006, the HP
brand had a share
of 31.4% which increased over time and reached 34.25% in 2014, whereas
the Dell company's portion was about half of the HP
initially
. However
, it was increased by almost 10% by the end of the term. In addition
,the other organisation by
name, Toshiba, was marked with Change preposition
apply
continuous
upward trend during the period and Correct article usage
a continuous
finally
, its share
was about one-fourth of the
Correct article usage
apply
HP
's share
value
.
On the other hand
, the price of the samsung
and Lenovo brands' Change the capitalization
Samsung
share
had
experienced a deviation in the year 2007 from 11.6 % and 6.6%, which were their Unnecessary verb
apply
intial
values respectively. Correct your spelling
initial
However
, at last
,the former's value
was about half of the
Dell's Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the latter holds about one-fifth value
of the HP
brand. Furthermore
, the market value
of Fujitsu and other brands was reduced over the span.Submitted by sivaleelamahendra1214 on
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