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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem

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Global warming is a hot topic around the world nowadays.
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, a huge number of
people
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 still do not tend to recycle their rubbish. I identify that there are two main reasons
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this
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 problem.
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,
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 essay will lay out those two reasons
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then
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 suggest the potential solutions to it. The main cause
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of the
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 lack of recycling in my opinion is that it could be a hassle
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apply
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a lot of times.
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, recycling a
plastic
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 water bottle takes several steps
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 of simply throwing the bottle in a
bin
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. One needs to peel the printed label around the bottle,
remove
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and remove
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 the lid if it is coloured; since they all
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need
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 to go in different bins. So I convey that
people
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 would rather choose to throw their
waste
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 in non-recycle
waste
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bin
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bins
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instead
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 of taking numerous steps to recycle. Lack of knowledge is another reason
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for
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 the problem. Some countries have more complicated
method
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methods
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 of recycling than other countries. South Korea,
in
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on
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one
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the one
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 hand, recycles
thing
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things
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 in great
details
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; they have a food
waste
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bin
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, clear
plastic
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bin
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, coloured
plastic
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bin
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 and more.
On the other hand
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, England does not have a food
waste
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bin
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 one single recycle
bin
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. In England,
plastic
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 and tins go in the same
bin
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. So in Korea, it is very likely that
people
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 will be confused about the
recycle
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 rules.
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This leds
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 to
low
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the low
a low
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 rate of recycling. The solution could be
simplified
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a simplified
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 method of recycling.
Instead
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 of making
people
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 recycle everything themselves, it would be more effective to simplify requirements, collect the garbage
then
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 go through complicated steps by skilled workers.
To sum up
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, two reasons why
people
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 do not recycle are
that
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is
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 is a hassle and lack of knowledge. In order to solve
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, governments should simplify the
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 methods.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apathy
  • environmental impact
  • passive attitude
  • recycling infrastructure
  • sustainability
  • accessible
  • disposing
  • awareness
  • participate
  • incentivizing
  • motivate
  • tangible
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