The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004
The line graph gives information about the four different
types
of Use synonyms
meat
Use synonyms
consumption
among countries in Europe between 1979 and 2004. Units measured in Use synonyms
grammes
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are different trends in the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
meat
. Use synonyms
Chicken
has upward trends compared to other Use synonyms
types
of Use synonyms
meat
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
Beef
has a downward trend.
The Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
chicken
in European countries rose substantially. From 1979 the Use synonyms
fish
Use synonyms
consumption
percentage was around 150 Use synonyms
grammes
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
and grew continuously to 250 Use synonyms
grammes
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
in 2004. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, people in Europe eat less Linking Words
beef
compared to other meats. The figure for Use synonyms
consumption
rate declined dramatically from around 200 Use synonyms
grammes
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
and hit the lowest percentage of Use synonyms
beef
Use synonyms
consumption
at 110 Use synonyms
grammes
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
. By the way, lamb Use synonyms
consumption
is downward trend compared to Use synonyms
chicken
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
fish
is only one Use synonyms
types
of Use synonyms
meat
that change regularly in consumer percentage.
To summarise, European people eat more Use synonyms
chicken
and consume less Use synonyms
beef
and lamb. Use synonyms
Linking Words
While
Correct word choice
Fish
fish
is only one of four Use synonyms
types
of Use synonyms
meat
that do not have any significant changes depending on Use synonyms
provided
figures.Correct article usage
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