The line graph below shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004
The line graph gives information about the four different
types
of meat
consumption
among countries in Europe between 1979 and 2004. Units measured in grammes
.
Overall
, there are different trends in the consumption
of fish
and meat
. Chicken
has upward trends compared to other types
of meat
. In contrast
, Beef
has a downward trend.
The consumption
of chicken
in European countries rose substantially. From 1979 the fish
consumption
percentage was around 150 grammes
per person
per week
and grew continuously to 250 grammes
per person
per week
in 2004. On the other hand
, people in Europe eat less beef
compared to other meats. The figure for consumption
rate declined dramatically from around 200 grammes
per person
per week
and hit the lowest percentage of beef
consumption
at 110 grammes
per person
per week
. By the way, lamb consumption
is downward trend compared to chicken
. Lastly
, fish
is only one types
of meat
that change regularly in consumer percentage.
To summarise, European people eat more chicken
and consume less beef
and lamb. While
Correct word choice
Fish
fish
is only one of four types
of meat
that do not have any significant changes depending on provided
figures.Correct article usage
the provided
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Vocabulary: Replace the words types, meat, consumption, grammes, fish, chicken, beef, person, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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