The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the number of passengers that arrive at three airports(
John
F
. Kennedy
, LaGuardia
and Newark) over the period of 6 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
Laguardia
Airport had the most visitors throughout the period. but in 2000, it experienced the highest influx of travellers while
the numbers for John
F
. Kennedy
declined consistently over the years.
In 1995, the Laguardia
had close to 35 million
visitors whereas
John
F
. Kennedy
remained in the second spot, slightly lower than 15 million
. Between the years 1996 and 1997, the arrival of passengers declined considerably in LaGuardia
while
John
F
. Kennedy
overtook by a margin of nearly 15 million
individuals, after that, the figure for John
F
. Kennedy
fell drastically till 1999 to 50 million
. By 1999, the visitors of LaGuardia
rose dramatically, reaching its highest at nearly 65 million
in 2000.
The Newark airport had a significantly lower number of passengers travelling compared to it's
counterparts. Replace the word
its
By contrast
, it had up to 15 million
in 1995, close to 25 million
in 1996 and the highest in 1999 at above 40 million
. Furthermore
, it overtook John
F
. Kennedy
by a range of nearly 10 million
people.Submitted by shahroz99dev on
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