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Write a letter to your friend about a book that you have read recently. Include the following in your letter: – Describe the book. – Why do you want him/her to read it? – Tell him/her how to get the book.

#friend #book
Dear Nihal, If you remember
during
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last
 month at my birthday party, I told you that I am trying to inculcate the habit of reading
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 my daily routine. I am so happy to let you know that I have completed reading my first ever
book
 - ' Dr Babasaheb Ambedkar' by Dhananjay
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. It is a biography of how he came from a small town and eventually became an Indian jurist.
Furthermore
, the
book
 includes his journey towards drafting our Indian constitution. I know you are soon going
yo
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 start your course in law. Perhaps, I would personally recommend you to read
this
book
 as it contains all the laws and regulations of India.
Subsequently
, it will help you to broaden your knowledge and understanding
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 the law.
This
book
 is available at the local
book store
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 across Mumbai.
Moreover
, it is
also
 available at www.amazon.com at
cheaper
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 rate. Do let me know if you are not able to find it anywhere, I will give my copy to you when we meet next time. Let's catch on next weekend at the newly launched sushi restaurant in the town. All the best, Kinnari
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task achievement
Consider proofreading your letter to catch minor typos, such as 'going yo' instead of 'going to'.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity and coherence.
suitable writing tone
The letter includes a clear, friendly greeting and closing, creating a suitable tone for writing to a friend.
logical structure
The structure of the letter is logical, with a clear description of the book, the reason for recommending it, and information about where to find it.
complete response
The content adequately addresses all parts of the task, making the response complete.
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