The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line graph displays information on the
amount
of people Change the quantifier
number
participated
Correct pronoun usage
who participated
for
different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the Change preposition
in
years
2000 to 2020.
From an overall
perspective, it is evident that Film
club had the highest number of Correct article usage
the Film
participants
over the entire time period. Musical performances and Table tennis increased significantly, while
Amateur dramatics decreased sharply.
In 2000, Film
club was the highest activity with Correct article usage
the Film
the
number of Correct article usage
a
participants
of just under 65 and it fluctuated between nearly 65 and 60 in the next 20 years
. Amateur dramatics had just above 25 participants
and it increased gradually to approximately 30 before it sharply decreased to nearly 5 in 2020. Martial arts hovered between just under 40 and around 30 from 2000 to 2020.
Musical performances had no participants
for the first 5 years
, however
, it increased dramatically to just below 20 in 2020. Table tennis had the lowest number of nearly 16 and it slightly increased to 20 in 2005 and remained stable for the next 5 years
before it significantly increased to just above 50 and became the second highest activity in 2020.Submitted by dr.omar-2010 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, participants with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!