The chart below shows the profit of resale markets sold over a period of ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about clothing item numbers which were sold in
second hand
stores in the period from 2017 to 2027. The period Add a hyphen
second-hand
contains
ten years. Verb problem
is
Overall
trend of Add an article
The overall
this
layout upward
.
In 2017 resale markets had a profit Add a missing verb
is upward
in
20 Change preposition
of
billions
dollars. Until 2019 benefit of flea stores increased and reached 28 Change to singular
billion
billions
dollars. In 2020 income of Change to singular
billion
thrifts
stores went down Change the noun form
thrift
for
Change preposition
by
a
one billion compared with the previous year. Correct article usage
apply
However
, it kept going up in other years. This
trend slightly increased until 2027 and will reach 70 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
profit.Change preposition
in
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