The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road. Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.
The figures depict how the changes that have occurred in Foster
Road
between 1984 and 1985. Overall
, the most noticeable change is pedestrianization and greener than before.
By 1984, there was a main road
that had 2-way with 5 buildings to the left and 4 buildings to the right. After the following year in 1985, the road
was reduced because on both sides some trees were added and then
the areas became greener. In the middle way, it was made a new crossing for integrate two areas with a white line and built
a new space for a red light, and Verb problem
apply
then
it can
easy for people to cross.
Verb problem
was
In addition
, the road
was reduced to developed
walking area. In that same year, it was built for pedestrianization. Correct article usage
a developed
Moreover
, the line in the road
was removed in 1985. Although
Foster Road
was developed, the building in
there was not altered.Change preposition
apply
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