The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social resposibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Enterprises giving priority to making money

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social responsibilities. I disagree with

this

argument.

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essay will support my argument followed by reasons and examples. On the one hand,

companies

must have a major role in society, especially in underdeveloped countries, enterprises can mitigate some of

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the citizen's

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citizen's

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citizens'

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problems

such

as unemployment.

Although

, a decrease in joblessness may reduce the level of poverty.

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, in Islamic countries

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companies

play a role in social welfare, by providing jobs, giving money to sick people and helping poor students to pay their bills.

On the other hand

, some

companies

don't care about the quality of their goods in order to reduce expenses and raise profits.

For example

, some markets may tend to exhibit and sell some outdated products despite throwing

these

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expired products. In my opinion,

companies

should make social responsibility a priority, to maintain their reputation and make a good relationship with the public. In conclusion, increasing money is one of the major goals of

companies

regardless of their responsibility toward the public.

Companies

must act as one of their societies to ensure their durability and consistency for a long period of time.