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The table below displays the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below displays the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 avout one university. Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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table below illustrates outcomes from research work about one college measured in percentages in
years
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the years
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 2000, 2005 and 2010. At first
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 it is evident that print and electronic resources are their strengths,
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a range
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 of modules and technical quality
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little lower. Turn to print and electronic resources, print
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 predominantly high starting from 2000 until 2010 stood around 87-89%. Electronic resources were assessed at 45% in 2000,
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 it was increased dramatically by 2010
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 88%. Following the table,
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 of modules offered decreased steadily year
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year
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 and stood at 27% in 2010 as the lowest one compared with others,
also
 technical quality shows little fluctuation beginning
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 65% and
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 showed 69%. Moving to building/ teaching facilities, the main fact is it is evaluated as 77%
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 all times and remained unchanged.
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