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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.
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The given bar chart illustrates the GDP growth per
year
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 for
Tunisia
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,
Japan
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 and
Ecuador
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 between the years 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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,
Tunisia
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 showed
decreasing
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a decreasing
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 trend whilst
Japan
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 followed
increasing
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an increasing
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 trend.
However
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,
Ecuador
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 showed fluctuations within the period given. To commence, in the
year
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 2007, the GDP growth per
year
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 for
Tunisia
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 was approximately 6.1% and that of
Japan
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 and
Ecuador
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 were lesser by almost 3 times and 2 times respectively. After a
year
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, the proportion of
Tunisia
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 declined by about 1.6%
whereas
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 it rose in
Japan
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 and
Ecuador
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 by double and by almost 1.8% respectively. In the following
year
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, there was a significant drop of nearly 3.8% in
Ecuador
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 and
similarly
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,
Tunisia
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 decreased by about 1.4%.
On
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In
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 contrast,
Japan
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further
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 increased and reached almost 5.1%. Ultimately, in the final
year
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2010
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of 2010
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,
Japan
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 was at the top with nearly 6.5%, which was almost tripled
to
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apply
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that in the beginning,
Tunisia
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 remained steady and was lower by almost double
to
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apply
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that in the beginning whilst
Ecuador
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 again rose by about 1.1% but is still at the bottom.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, tunisia, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP growth rate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peaks and troughs
  • economic performance
  • comparative analysis
  • stability
  • volatility
  • economic crisis
  • policy changes
  • annual growth
  • main features
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