The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. k
The given demonstrated illustrations compare
a
data Correct article usage
apply
of
eliminating hazardous waste in three countries shown. Change preposition
on
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
in all situations Linking Words
incineration
has Use synonyms
totally
possession of the rank in two of Change the word
total
threes
, Fix the agreement mistake
three
meanwhile
a minority amount of sorting waste was shown by the United Kingdom only.
Turning to the details, for the Republic of Korea a majority Add a comma
meanwhile,
part is
Verb problem
apply
consisted
Wrong verb form
consists
from
Change preposition
of
recycling
process Correct article usage
the recycling
by
69%, Change preposition
apply
then
next is undergrounding way with 22%, and the least one is Linking Words
incineration
Use synonyms
with
9%. Change preposition
at
Following
Linking Words
this
, for Sweden there were vice versa, an enormous portion possessed by underground methods with 55%, recycling and Linking Words
incineration
with 25% and 20% respectively. Use synonyms
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
The United
demonstrate
Change the verb form
demonstrates
Linking Words
Change the word
similar
similarly
numbers as Replace the word
similar
Correct article usage
the two
two
countries, actually with Correct article usage
the two
Change the word
marginal
marginally
differences, Replace the word
marginal
such
as undergrounding by 82%,Linking Words
Correct word choice
and a
a
little bit of Correct word choice
and a
incineration
by 2%.
At the same time in the United Use synonyms
Kingdom
there Add a comma
Kingdom,
are
another kind of waste conduction. Change the verb form
is
For instance
, chemical treatment and dumping at sea Linking Words
by
the data about 8% for each one.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words incineration with synonyms.
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