The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided map indicates how a
cinema
has changed in a particular local area from 1980 until present
day.
A glance at the graph reveals that the whole place has experienced a considerable amount of construction and urbanization over the period.
In 1980,there used to be a huge car park in the north of the region.Add an article
the present
However
,the car park has been demolished and turned into Cinema
2 and Cinema
3 in the northwest and northeast of the area,respectively.Moreover
,the male and female toilet
Fix the agreement mistake
toilets
has
remained unchanged in the west of the region between Correct subject-verb agreement
have
two
cinemas.Another striking development is the erection of the Relax room and Food Drinks Correct article usage
the two
instead
of Cinema
1 in the southwest of
place next to the Entry.
It is interesting to note that the Ticket store has levelled off beside the Entry from 1980 until now.Whilst,the Drinks store has been removed and replaced by DVD Shop next to the Ticket shop in recent years.Another notable construction is that Change preposition
apply
Cinema
2 has been transformed into Cinema
4 and Cinema
5.That is
to say,the number of cinemas has been
climbed substantially.Unnecessary verb
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema with synonyms.
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