The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map indicates how a
cinema
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has changed in a particular local area from 1980 until
present
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the present
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day. A glance at the graph reveals that the whole place has experienced a considerable amount of construction and urbanization over the period. In 1980,there used to be a huge car park in the north of the region.
However
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,the car park has been demolished and turned into
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2 and
Cinema
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3 in the northwest and northeast of the area,respectively.
Moreover
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,the male and female
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has
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remained unchanged in the west of the region between
two
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cinemas.Another striking development is the erection of the Relax room and Food Drinks
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of
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1 in the southwest
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place next to the Entry. It is interesting to note that the Ticket store has levelled off beside the Entry from 1980 until now.Whilst,the Drinks store has been removed and replaced by DVD Shop next to the Ticket shop in recent years.Another notable construction is that
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2 has been transformed into
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4 and
Cinema
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5.
That is
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to say,the number of cinemas has
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climbed substantially.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cinema with synonyms.
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