The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The diagram illustrates the floor plan of the central library 20 years ago and what it looks like today.
Overall
, every location of rooms and furniture was changed. Tables and chairs were removed from the centre of the library and a new cafe was built.
The room
where people can watch videos and use computers was moved to the under-left corner room
. In the space where the computer room
was located in the past, a room
for children's fiction books
and storytelling events was made. In addition
, there are two sofas in this
room
. The up-right corner room
is the lecture room
and when you go out of there, there is an adult fiction books
corner, an information desk and self-service machines. Lastly
, on the under-right side, there was an enquiry desk but now the cafe has come in and citizens can see all the reference books
in the space where adult fiction books
were located .Submitted by mianraza686 on
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