Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Humera, I hope

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letter finds you radiant in health and best of spirits. I am writing

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to express my appreciation to you for

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a wonderful trip and awesome capture that was planned

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month in Canada. It was my first

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to visit oversee and was really the best

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that I remember all five of us have spent together till now. I was so excited about

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trip as it was a 1-month trip and want to capture the memories with your 3HD Camera. I found that the collections of photos you sent were so scenic and really beautiful. It was really good for all of us that we had a great

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with each other after 2 years away from our working schedules. I would really be overwhelmed if you could plan the Christmas holidays at my place and stay with me at my farmhouse. We can have more fun and can explore new places around my city in Mumbai. There are lots of historical places , Malls , Centers and different tourist places . We can even visit our college Lovely Professional University to refresh the college

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that we had spent together. Hope

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sounds good . Eager to see you soon. Warm wishes Gurpreet Kaur

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Try to refine the overall logical structure of the letter by ensuring a smoother flow of ideas from one paragraph to the next. This can improve clarity and make your writing more cohesive.

task achievement

You can enhance the writing tone to closely match the context by using more conversational expressions and reducing the formality, since this is a letter to friends.

task achievement

Your letter addresses both parts of the task—thanking your friends for the holiday and inviting them to stay with you—which is excellent.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of your letter are well-crafted, adding a personal touch and making the letter feel friendlier.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph conveys a single idea effectively, making the letter easy to read.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

214 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

hospitality
memorable
appreciate
relive
extend an invitation
look forward to
highlight
attractions
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enjoyable
arrangements
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