The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The charts indicate the changes in the
percentage
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of
households
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with electrical
appliances
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and
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the
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number of
hours
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of
housework
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each week in
households
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in one nation from 1920 to 2019. In general, the
percentage
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of
households
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with Washing machines, Refrigerators, and
Vacuum
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cleaners saw a rising trend.
On the other hand
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, the number of
hours
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of
housework
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declined. Looking at the information for more detail, in 1920, the Refrigerator was the lowest
percentage
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of
households
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with electrical
appliances
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at nearly 5 per
cent
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. The Washing machine accounted for nearly 40 per
cent
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and the
Vacuum
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cleaner for nearly 30 per
cent
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. Refrigerator overtook
Vacuum
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cleaner
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cleaners
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in 1940 and surpassed Washing
machine
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machines
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in 1960. On the one hand, the number of
hours
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of
housework
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each week in
households
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steadily decreased from 1920 to 2109. Especially, the figure for
hours
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of
housework
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each week between 1920 and 2019 remained stable during
this
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period. After that,
Refrigerator
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Refrigerators
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was the most
was
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were
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the
most
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highest
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percentage
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of
households
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with electrical
appliances
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in 1980.
Then
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, the
Vacuum
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cleaner became 100 per
cent
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of
households
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with electrical
appliances
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in 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, appliances, hours, housework, vacuum, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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