The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
This
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manufacture
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levels of the main
typs
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types
of
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fuel in the United
kingdom
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from 1981 to 2000. It is clear from the graph that, the Petroleum
, Natural
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and natural
gas
have approximately the same pattern and we can see the Coal
prepartion
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preparation
shows a
flactuated
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fluctuated
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rate during
this
time.
According to
what is shown, In 1981 there
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40
tonnes
for
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petroleum and around 85 for Natural
gas
after that petroleum
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a
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rapid
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grew with 140 after two
years
then
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flactuated untill
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fluctuated until
2000
tonnes
.
Moreover
, Natural
gas
remained steady from 1981 to 1991
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the same year the making of it
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a major
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with 100
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at
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2000.
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the
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, Coal productivity
start
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with
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80
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at
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1981
whereas
at
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after 3
years
has a massive
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within
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half
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that it
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previously after that it
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slightly grew
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20
tonnes
also
,
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the next
years
it
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gradually
dropping
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dropped
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with
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about 38
tonnes
at 2000.
To sum up
we could say that, ptroleum
, Natural
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and natural
gas
have the most productive
at
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these
years
in
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contrast
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with
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Coal
making
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it is remained
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with
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the same
rated start
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flactuated and levelled at
last
years
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year
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas, tonnes, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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