The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map below illustrates two possible areas for a shopping mall in Brandfield.
Overall
, Brandfield has a housing estate in the north area
,
also
a golf course and park in the western area
, and an industrial estate in the southeast of the city
. there are two possible locations, are namely S1 and S2. in comprision, S1 is closer to many places than S2.
S1 is located in
the north side of Brandfield and a river located under it, which runs from north to southwest of the Change preposition
on
city
. Moreover
, a railway near S1,
crosses the Remove the comma
apply
city
from northwest to southeast. In addition
, this
location is close to popular areas such
as the housing, the city
center
, and the golf course and park.
The second location which could Change the spelling
centre
S2
is situated in the southwest of Brandfiel. It is circled by the the railway and the road, which lies next to the industrial estate, and far away from the housing Add a missing verb
be S2
area
. In comparison, this
area
does not have many facilities like S1, therefore
, it is not suitable for a shopping mall.Submitted by saja.alotaibi on
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