The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below illustrates two possible areas for a shopping mall in Brandfield.

Overall

, Brandfield has a housing estate in the north

area

also

a golf course and park in the western

area

, and an industrial estate in the southeast of the

city

. there are two possible locations, are namely S1 and S2. in comprision, S1 is closer to many places than S2. S1 is located

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the north side of Brandfield and a river located under it, which runs from north to southwest of the

city

Moreover

, a railway near S1

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crosses the

city

from northwest to southeast.

In addition

this

location is close to popular areas

such

as the housing, the

city

center

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, and the golf course and park. The second location which could

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be S2

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is situated in the southwest of Brandfiel. It is circled by the the railway and the road, which lies next to the industrial estate, and far away from the housing

area

. In comparison,

this

area

does not have many facilities like S1,

therefore

, it is not suitable for a shopping mall.

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