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The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map below illustrates two possible areas for a shopping mall in Brandfield.
Overall
, Brandfield has a housing estate in the north
area
,
also
 a golf course and park in the western
area
, and an industrial estate in the southeast of the
city
. there are two possible locations, are namely S1 and S2. in comprision, S1 is closer to many places than S2. S1 is located
in
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 the north side of Brandfield and a river located under it, which runs from north to southwest of the
city
.
Moreover
, a railway near S1
,
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 crosses the
city
 from northwest to southeast.
In addition
,
this
 location is close to popular areas
such
 as the housing, the
city
center
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, and the golf course and park. The second location which could
S2
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 is situated in the southwest of Brandfiel. It is circled by the the railway and the road, which lies next to the industrial estate, and far away from the housing
area
. In comparison,
this
area
 does not have many facilities like S1,
therefore
, it is not suitable for a shopping mall.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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