The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below illustrates two possible areas for a shopping mall in Brandfield.

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, Brandfield has a housing estate in the north

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a golf course and park in the western

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, and an industrial estate in the southeast of the

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. there are two possible locations, are namely S1 and S2. in comprision, S1 is closer to many places than S2. S1 is located

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the north side of Brandfield and a river located under it, which runs from north to southwest of the

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, a railway near S1

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crosses the

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from northwest to southeast.

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location is close to popular areas

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as the housing, the

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center

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, and the golf course and park. The second location which could

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be S2

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is situated in the southwest of Brandfiel. It is circled by the the railway and the road, which lies next to the industrial estate, and far away from the housing

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. In comparison,

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does not have many facilities like S1,

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, it is not suitable for a shopping mall.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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5 paragraphs

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shopping mall
city center
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urban planning
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consumer behavior
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The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local business rather than foreign businesses. to what extent do you agree?

In many countries, school-age children are spending their free time in doing homework. Is it a good or bad thing? What is your opinion? Give examples to support your view.

Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development?