The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting foor clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016

The line graph compares data about the weekly rate of illnesses who visited four different clinics, which comprise birth control, eye, diabetic, and dental, of a hygiene

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between 2010 to 2016. From an

overall

perspective, the number of

visitors

for three clinics, which

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Dental, Birth control, and Diabetic, fluctuated around their initial number of

visitors

in 2010,

however

,

Eye

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clinic soared during the examined years.

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born

managing

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and Diabetic clinics, it is obvious that both had an

increase

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trend in the first interval between 2010 and 2012. Despite the fact that diabetics stayed constant until 2012, the rate of born

child

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dramatically dropped from almost 300

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lower

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than 200

visitors

.

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, both rose, the birth control couldn’t receive,

however

, its peak in 2012.

On the other hand

, the eye clinic surged through from higher than 100 to 350

illness

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at the end

. In the light of the fact that the number of

visitors

with toothache slightly declined from 100 to 50 approximately.

Then

, it gently went up

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2012 and 2014. After that, it remained

steadily

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, at almost 130.