Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

#friend #city #place #addresses

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Hello, my dear friend. I hope you are doing well. I don't remember if I told you that we had

planed

Correct your spelling

planned

show examples

to move to the new place. Now we are living in another country already 5

monthes

Correct your spelling

months

. All of our family had moved, including our 4 cats. The place, we are living, is a small, pretty, and very green town. We have

Correct article usage

a wonderfull

show examples

wonderfull

Correct your spelling

wonderful

3 bedroom townhouse - 2 floors and the basement. We developed the basement to be our home office.

Moreover

Linking Words

, we have the backyard, that was abandoned by the previous tenants, but I'm trying

Correct your spelling

show examples

grow something there. Not far from our house - 5 minutes by car or 30 minutes by foot is an amazing public park with plenty of flowers,

waterfall

Correct article usage

a waterfall

show examples

pond

Correct article usage

a pond

show examples

with

geezes

Correct your spelling

geezers

, etc. In the winter they

are making here

Wrong verb form

make

show examples

a skating track

Rephrase

here.

show examples

Furthermore

Linking Words

, there are a lot of city events in

this

Linking Words

park, the

last

Linking Words

one we participated next was The RibFest, with many tasty food and beautiful music of 70-th. I am very

exaiting

Correct your spelling

exciting

exiting

to invite you to visit me in my new home. Maybe it'll be suitable

Change preposition

for

show examples

you to spend your next vacation with us. Best regards, Anastassia

Submitted by anastasia on Mon Jul 22 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement

Be mindful of some spelling and grammatical errors: 'monthes' should be 'months', 'wonderfull' should be 'wonderful', 'geezes' should be 'geese', 'exaiting' should be 'excited'.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that paragraphs are clear and logically structured. Some sentences could be better organized for easier reading. For instance, you could separate the description of the town from the description of your activities to make it clearer.

task achievement

You have provided a complete response to the task by explaining why you moved, describing your new place, and inviting your friend.

task achievement

The tone of your writing is very friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.

coherence cohesion

You used linking words and phrases effectively to connect ideas (e.g., 'moreover', 'furthermore').

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, many people think that art, does not have any benefits to our community and countries spend lots of money for nothing when they could spend this money on our society. However, I have many states for prove that this profession has been essential since life started.
5.5
band
Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the causes and solutions for this issue?
it is considered that natural surrounding is in a disastrous situation. this phenomenon has plenty of reasons and ways to be resolved, which will be discussed in this essay.
6.5
band
Nowadays number of older people select to live in retirement communities with other people rather than living with their adults .is it a positive or negative way.
These days , a lot of older humans decide to inhabit senior living communities with their peers preferably to reside with their grandchildren. I think that it is the worst concept for retired human beings because old people have only one duty which is to help to bring up their generation in the right way including talking about history and goodness and honesty of the world to their grandkids.But there are other sides to this idea , for instance, their behaviour alternated to negative ways when they were older . By the dwelling retired individuals with the same character owners .Tolerating balky identity.
7
band
Write about the advantages and disadvantages of robots
We are standing at the early dawn of the new world. Therefore, with the development and creativity of technology, communities are now using robots to serve their daily life. However, others suppose that robots will replace humans in the future if residents overuse them. This essay will present some benefits and drawbacks of robots.
5
band
In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In contemporary era, the number of people longing for learning about the historical background of the accomodation they wish to live in is rising. Given that this phenomenon stems from people wanting to ensure a reliable source of investment and safety, it can be pursued through several ways that this essay further elaborates on.

Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What are the causes and solutions for this issue?

Nowadays number of older people select to live in retirement communities with other people rather than living with their adults .is it a positive or negative way.

Write about the advantages and disadvantages of robots

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.