The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph shows banana prices in four countries, namely Japan, France, Germany, and the United States of America from 1995 to 2004. The kilograms were measured in dollars.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the Japanese made up the highest price throughout the years,
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, Americans made up the lowest price.
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and Germany witnessed fluctuations in the prices of bananas.
To begin
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with, the cost of bananas in Japan stood at about $1.85
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and had a noticeable increase in 1995 to almost 2.90 $.
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, from 1996 to 2001 the cost experienced fluctuation and reached approximately $1.55,
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it had a gradual rise to around $2.52.
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, in France It accounted for nearly $1.75, and remained constant until 1997, in 2003 had a significant decrease to $1.00.
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, Germany was
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around $1.4 and it fluctuated until 2001,
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it remained stable until the end of the year to about $1.75.
On the other hand
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, the United States of America was the least expensive among the countries. It began at approximately $0.75
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and
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increased gradually to almost $1.75. The cost was stable from 1998 to 2004 with a nearly 1.75 dollar
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • stability
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • significant
  • comparison
  • variation
  • consistently
  • peak
  • trough
  • average
  • period
  • respectively
  • domestic market
  • external factors
  • plummet
  • surge
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