In some countries today, many people decide to have their first child when they are older. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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offspring in their latter stage of life.

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problem can be explained by various reasons, namely economic and parental knowledge issues, from my perspective, I hold a belief that

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phenomenon has more advantages than its drawbacks. In terms of the reasons why more

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prefer having

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late,

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can be attributed to the fact that they focus on strengthening their financial ability to raise a baby. In order to provide

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high-quality living

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and

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educational system for

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typically devote a large amount of

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sustainable economic background, laying

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for

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comprehensive environment for their

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offspring.

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, affluent

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can afford to let their babies

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grow up and follow academic

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in international institutions which can overwhelmingly impact

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children

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’s development and ability, allowing them to become global citizens in their later

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.

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, the issue related to

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birth when

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older cannot be disregarded, namely isolation

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for adults and a higher rate of getting health

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for

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of all,

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endeavor

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for

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work and

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money for a long span of

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people

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from

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feeling

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of isolation and loneliness.

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and

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of

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may increase when the mothers are over 35 years old, spelling trouble for the

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generation which not only has negative impacts on

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but

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the survival process of these

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the noticeable drawbacks of giving

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birth when

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are older, I firmly concur

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has more advantages for both

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and their

children

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.

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,

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may have adequate knowledge about how to raise a child precisely and various potential solutions to overcome difficulties in

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pregnant

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process,

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, devoting a few years to

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their future career is worthy which allows them to be ideal

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phenomenon that numerous adults take up a parental course which requires them a plethora of

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to be ready for the important milestone in their life – having their newborn baby. That

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as the crucial step to pave a better way for their later generation. In conclusion, adults requiring more

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to have

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better financial capability is the rationale why numerous

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giving

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their

first

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child late,

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being knowledgeable which

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that the benefits are surpassed its counterpart, namely the empty feeling and problems for

children

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