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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The Line diagram shows the
production
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level
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 of the natural resources of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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, the line diagram shows the three main
production
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level
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levels
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 of the natural resources the three types
are
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,
Petroleum
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, Coal and Natural gas are used in the years between 1981 and 2000. In the year 1981, the
production
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level
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 of
petroleum
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 was getting started to increase in the energy units. At, the time of 1984 the
use
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 of
petroleum
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 was at
the
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its
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 peak
of
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apply
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use
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 during that period the usage of coal
was
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gratually
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gradually
decraced
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decreased
decorated
beasuce
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because
 the
high
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high-level
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level
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production
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of production
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 of
petroleum
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. Suddenly, the
petroleum
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prduction
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production
 was reduced in the year 1990. After that, it was increased in 2000.
The coal
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Coal
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production
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 was
continuesly
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continuously
 reduced because high
use
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 of petrol. Natural gas usage was very low
in
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at
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 the beginning of 1981 after words the
use
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 and
production
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 of natural gas
was
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started to increase constantly and it reached
the
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its
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 peak
at
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in
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 early 2000.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, level, petroleum, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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