You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The Line diagram shows the
production
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level
of the natural resources of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
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Overall
, the line diagram shows the three main Linking Words
production
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level
of the natural resources the three typesFix the agreement mistake
levels
are
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apply
Petroleum
, Coal and Natural gas are used in the years between 1981 and 2000.
In the year 1981, the Use synonyms
production
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level
of Use synonyms
petroleum
was getting started to increase in the energy units. At, the time of 1984 the Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
petroleum
was at Use synonyms
the
peak Change the word
its
of
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apply
use
during that period the usage of coal Use synonyms
was
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gratually
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gradually
decraced
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decreased
decorated
beasuce
the Correct your spelling
because
high
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high-level
level
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production
of Change preposition
of production
petroleum
. Suddenly, the Use synonyms
petroleum
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prduction
was reduced in the year 1990. After that, it was increased in 2000. Correct your spelling
production
The coal
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Coal
production
was Use synonyms
continuesly
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continuously
use
of petrol.
Natural gas usage was very low Use synonyms
in
the beginning of 1981 after words the Change the preposition
at
use
and Use synonyms
production
of natural gas Use synonyms
was
started to increase constantly and it reached Unnecessary verb
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the
peak Change the word
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at
early 2000.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, level, petroleum, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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