The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010
The given graph provides information about how much money was wasted in two European countries
in
various goods in the year Change preposition
on
of
2010. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
more and more British people spend their fortune on cars , books as well as
cameras, although
the French people pay attention to computers and perfumes.
To begin
with, the expenses of the cars in the
Great Britain made up the highest contribution rather than other trends . Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, individuals who lived in the UK were spending their money not only cameras
but Change preposition
on cameras
also
books
at nearly 35000 € and 45000€ respectively in 2010.
Change preposition
on books
On the contrary
, the perfume productions
in France was bigger than that of Fix the agreement mistake
production
UK
by 60000Correct article usage
the UK
pound
in 2010. Change to a plural noun
pounds
Nevertheless
, wasting more wealth reached a peak among French humans , while
this
trend was lower than Britain
approximately 50000 Change noun form
Britain's
pound
in 2010Change to a plural noun
pounds
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