The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
The chart illustrates the
proportion
of Use synonyms
urban
population of four different Asian countries from 1970 to 2020 and future years’ prediction.
It is clearly observed from the chart that the figure for Add an article
the urban
Malaysia
saw a gradual rise during the whole period, and it is going to be the highest by 2040. Use synonyms
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in
Thailand
fluctuates moderately between 1970 to 2020, There will be Use synonyms
a
significant growth in future.
In 1970, the Remove the article
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proportion
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Malaysia
was 30 which is approximately equal to that of Use synonyms
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Philippines
. the figure for Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
increased gradually to nearly 45% in 1990 which is just under that of Use synonyms
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Philippines
. After 1990 the percentage of Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysian
urban population rose gradually by about 30%, Correct article usage
the Malaysian
while
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Philippines
saw a slight decline of 10% over the same period. Correct article usage
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predictions show that both Add a comma
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Philippine's
Philippines'
proportion
will rise in subsequent years. The percentage for Use synonyms
Malaysia
will be nearly 80% and for Use synonyms
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Philippines
will be nearly 50% in 2040.
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the Philippines
On the other hand
, the percentage of Indonesia was the lowest at nearly 15% in 1970 and that of Linking Words
Thailand
was nearly 20%. Between 1970 to 2020, the Use synonyms
proportion
of Indonesia increased significantly to nearly 50% Use synonyms
whereas
that of Linking Words
Thailand
fluctuated between 20% and 30%. Use synonyms
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some individuals predict that the percentages of Indonesia and Add a comma
also,
Thailand
will continue to rise to 60% and 45%, respectively in 2040.Use synonyms
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