This is an IELTS writing task 1 sample answer essay on the topic of a map of a ground floor in a building and containing 3 maps. The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed overtime.

The maps illustrate how much change on the ground floor of a building from the year 1958 until

present

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the present

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.

Overall

, it can be seen from the plan that, despite a building serving for several purposes for many years, including residential and commercial, the kitchen

was only

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remained

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unchanged

remaining

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apply

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. At present,

this

area

has been renovated to be a flower shop with various open areas for flowers. To commence, in 1958, the

room

on the left side corner inside the building was used as a meeting

room

, which was extended and

turn

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into a living

room

in 1985. Followed closely by an assistant’s office next to the meeting

room

with a secretary’s office which was located closer to an entrance

the

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area

on the left. The

area

on the left side after coming

in

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into

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this

building was a restroom.

However

, those three rooms were demolished and changed to

Bathroom

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a Bathroom

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in 1985,

thus

currently being renovated to a play

area

and flower zone. On the right side, both a reception counter and a

manager

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manager's

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working space were turned into bedrooms when they were used as an apartment.

Then

, those bedrooms were renovated for an open space with flowers and the office of the florist shop.

While

the most inside

room

was kitchen

room

all along.