What impact does the tool have on planning and policy-making for future governments?

Last
year I got the chance to work
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on
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project. The project was to find
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how many
peoples
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have studied till high school.We have the website in which we
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inserting the data. So basically, the website is
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a tool
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which
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developed through Machine learning
algorthim
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algorithm
algorithms
so we
calulcate
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calculate
the higher studies percentage for our country. The great benefit is that the tool
also
tells you about the age bracket, and gender or areas wise record. It
also
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government to check and balance the lower literacy areas.The most important thing
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I have learnt
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this
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tools
also
predict
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the future
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increase
or decrement of literacy rate
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high schools. Which
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us to make
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the decision
plan for
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government
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grammar
Ensure grammatical accuracy. For instance, 'We have the website in which we was inserting the data' should be 'We had a website into which we were inserting the data.'
introduction and conclusion
Introduce and conclude your essay clearly. Start with a broad statement about the tool's impact on planning and policy-making before narrowing down to the specific example you worked on, and summarize your points at the end.
task response and ideas
Elaborate on how the tool benefits policy-making. For example, explain the implications of the predictions made by the tool on government decisions in more detail.
engagement
The essay shares a relevant personal experience, which makes it more engaging.
task response
The example provided is specific and directly related to the topic, showing practical application of the tool.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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