In many parts of the world, there is not enough food for everyone. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
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fulfill
their needs, which is food that contains Change the spelling
fulfil
nutrion
. The causes of Correct your spelling
nutrition
this
issue are lack of water resources and the land is arid. Linking Words
However
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do to
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apply
this
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importing
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.
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with, the Linking Words
country
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that
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apply
foods
to Fix the agreement mistake
food
their
citizens Correct pronoun usage
its
is
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apply
do
not support it. Change the verb form
does
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starving
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starvation
was happen
in African states Change the verb form
happened
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the Linking Words
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country
lack of water and Change noun form
country's
can not
rely on Verb problem
inability to
rainy
season. By Correct article usage
the rainy
this
, the plant and the animal can not produce well. The plant can not generate fruits and vegetables to consume. Linking Words
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, the animal can not produce milk and its meat might not be Linking Words
in
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of
a
good quality. So, Remove the article
apply
that is
why a lot of states facing Linking Words
this
problem owing to the resources to produce foods Linking Words
can
not produce well.
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that can
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, the government can implement an import policy. Nowadays, many countries Linking Words
used
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are used
the
products and services Correct article usage
apply
one
another. Change preposition
with one
For instance
, one Linking Words
country
in Africa may not export food but they can change it with their manufactures to Use synonyms
the
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a
country
that Use synonyms
do
not have Change the verb form
does
an
advanced technology to produce it. In return, that Correct article usage
the
country
can export Use synonyms
like
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apply
as to
, both will get benefits from it and decrease case of shortage Change preposition
apply
foods
.
In conclusion, Change preposition
of foods
deficiency
of water resources and Correct article usage
the deficiency
condition
of the land Correct article usage
the condition
that is
arid become reasons why people experience Linking Words
this
phenomenon. Linking Words
On the other hand
, there Linking Words
is
solutions to it like doing import and export. Change the verb form
are
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, Linking Words
this
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one
and only solution that the Correct article usage
the one
country
can adopt, the Use synonyms
country
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another ways
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other ways
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on the needs of the Wrong verb form
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country
.Use synonyms
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