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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the
levels
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 of
production
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 of different fuel sources in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, the amount of
petroleum
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 and natural gas produced has been
incresed
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increased
 by the year 2000,
whereas
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petroleum
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production
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levels
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was
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were
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 the highest among the three main fuels over the two decades. Coal
prouction
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production
 continued to decrease over the given period and was the least fuel produced in 2000. In 1981, the UK produced more
petroleum
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 than the other resources with an energy level of almost 90 energy
units
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, its
production
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 continued to surge over the following three years reaching 140
units
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 and remained on the same
levels
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 before starting to decline back to 100
units
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 in 1990. Over the following
decade
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petroleum
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production
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levels
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 started to rise back to 140
units
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 and almost stayed steady till the end of the given period. Natural gas was the lowest fuel produced in 1981
which
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apply
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accounted
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 for 40
units
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 and remained at the same
levels
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 till 1991
where
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when
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 it rocketed to 100
units
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 in 2000. As for coal
production
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, its energy
levels
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 started to decline from 80
units
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 in 1981 to around 30
units
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 in 2000, with some fluctuation during the first decade of the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words levels, production, petroleum, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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