The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Butterfly life cycle
The picture describes the life process of the Monarch butterfly .
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, it gives detailed information regarding each stage of its life
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of the Monarch butterfly consists of 9 stages from Use synonyms
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the insect travels a great distance in between these stages. Linking Words
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are attached to the leaves of the plant . Use synonyms
Secondly
, after 14 days it becomes a hatched larva .Later it becomes a caterpillar and feeds on the plant and gets attached to the plant. In the next stage, it becomes the pupa called chrysalis .
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after 10 days it comes out of the pupa as an adult butterfly . In the next stages, it finishes migrations to the south and reaches back north in a period of 6 months . In the final stage in the north, it finds a mate and the egg-laying process is done after mating . Linking Words
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