The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Butterfly life cycle
The picture describes the life process of the Monarch butterfly .
Furthermore
, it gives detailed information regarding each stage of its life
Overall
, the living cycle
of the Monarch butterfly consists of 9 stages from as
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apply
eggs
on milkweed plants to lay
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laying
eggs
again . it is clear that
the insect travels a great distance in between these stages. Furthermore
, it is a repeating cycle
Firstly
, the cycle
starts as eggs
on the milkweed plants . The eggs
are attached to the leaves of the plant . Secondly
, after 14 days it becomes a hatched larva .Later it becomes a caterpillar and feeds on the plant and gets attached to the plant. In the next stage, it becomes the pupa called chrysalis .
Following
this
after 10 days it comes out of the pupa as an adult butterfly . In the next stages, it finishes migrations to the south and reaches back north in a period of 6 months . In the final stage in the north, it finds a mate and the egg-laying process is done after mating . Thus
, repeating the cycle
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