Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When

adults

choose to

study

, it is mostly for self-enrichment, for enjoyment or self-improvement, and not to work toward a vacation or degree. They have two opinions in front of them.

One

is to do

self-

study

through various resources

such

as the

internet

or libraries and the other is by enrolling in regular classes.

While

I agree that

self-

study

is more convenient for

adults

, a more effective approach would be to do

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part of the

study

on

one

’s own and top it up with a few days in the

classroom

. With the help of the

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self-

study

can be a very useful way to learn anything nowadays. There are thousands of resources available on the

internet

that can help

one

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traverse the ins and outs of any subject. Many sites

also

offer video tutorials. By utilizing the vast amounts of teaching resources

as well as

authentic materials,

such

as

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online websites of some universities,

one

can really develop

one

’s skills independently.

Besides

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one

can purchase textbooks or borrow books from libraries that can help in learning about any subject.

Furthermore

,

self-

study

is considered better because many

adults

find it difficult to return to a

classroom

setting after spending years in the workplace. Many adult students

also

struggle to find the time to pursue education alongside their obligations at work and at home.

In addition

,

self-

study

requires very little finances and

one

can

also

look after family commitments.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantages of

self-

study

.

To begin

with, it is difficult to remain focused on

study

one

can get bored or distracted very soon. The teachers in the

classroom

setting can keep

one

focused on

study

.

Secondly

,

while

doing

self-

study

, there are chances that

one

can

study

incorrectly.

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, for

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self-education is much more convenient as the

classroom

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not be in an approachable location or the timing may not suit them. On

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it can be concluded that, as there are many barriers to adult education

such

as time, money and family commitments, I agree to quite some extent that

self-

study

is a good way for them.

However

, I would

also

like to say that the ideal approach would be to have a blend of

self-

study

and

classroom

learning.