The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Metro systems information

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The table gives data regarding the rail metro in six different towns .

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, it gives details about the supplementary parameters

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as the number of tracks , total length , yearly travel and pricing per travel .

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, there is a drastic difference in the total number of lines in between the city metro rail systems . The total distance covered by each rail system is

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variable .

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, the yearly travels in all cities other than Tokyo and Beijing are comparable .

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to that, there is a huge variation in individual ticket pricing among the systems . Data shows that the New York subway has more than double the tracks of the London Tube which has only 11 . The New York subway covers almost six times more distance than the Paris Metro, which covers only 127 miles

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, Beijing and Tokyo subways have about double yearly journeys in relation to others .

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, London Tube journey pricing is enormously high in comparison with that of Mexico City and Beijing systems . The Mexico subway is the cheapest at $0.23

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the London tube charges &7.30 per travel

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