The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate information about the ratio of the population living in
cities
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from 1970 to 2020 and predictions for 2030 and 2040 in four different South East Asian regions.
Overall
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, the trend of citizens of the four countries is upward throughout the research period. First of all, in 1970, the Philippines had people, who lived in a metropolis, the most popular approximately 32 per
cent
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.
While
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, Indonesian individuals lived in urban, which was the least popular at 13 per
cent
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of the above regions. From 1970 to 1990, people living in
cities
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of all four countries increased gradually by about 1,5 times.
Secondly
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, between 1990 and 2020, there was a considerable rise in the percentage of
Malaysian
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Malaysians
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living in
cities
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from 45 to 70 per
cent
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, which was the highest in observation regions.
In contrast
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, Filipinos living in urban had a downtrend of about 10 per
cent
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.
Last
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but not least,
this
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research depicts predictions about the trend of population for 2030 and 2040. The trend of population living in
cities
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will go up in the next decade.
While
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,
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the rate of citizens in Malaysia will reach a peak at 80 per
cent
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in 2040.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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