The bar chart shows the results of the survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London thought of the city
this
bar chart illustrates the result of a survey conducted over a three
-year period to to
show the opinion of some people who live in London about the city.Well,there are a lot of noticeable things that can be observed.Remove the redundancy
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Overall
,we can see that the range of shops has the highest proportion
through the years
.
On the one hand,we can observe that nightlife, transport , museums and art galleries have nearly the same proportion
throughout the three
years
with a small difference between them.Moreover
,museums ,art galleries and transport were at their best in year three
and they both have approximately the same proprotion
.
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proportion
proportions
On the other hand
,the range of shops has been eliminating
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through
the Change preposition
over
three
years
with approximately 45% and it's the highest proportion
over the three
years
.In addition
,job opportunities and a mixture of people have almost the same proportion
through the years
with nearly 35%.Submitted by yousefreyad55 on
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