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The bar chart below illustrates the number of public transport users in five different cities over a period of three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates the number of public transport users in five different cities over a period of three years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the
amount
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number
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 of
people
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 who use public vehicles in the 5 cities in the time of three years .
Overall
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, it can be seen that residents of Rome and Paris have always been active users of public transport at the given time and all of the cities showed similar gradually rising patterns throughout the time period.
People
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 from London and Madrid used public transport almost similar in number. Their high usage amount is estimated at 12000 in London and 10000 in Madrid in the year 2020 . In the year 2020 number of
people
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 who use public transport reached its peak in Paris and Rome with over 14000
people
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 each
of
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apply
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them
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. Berlin has shown quite confusing patterns.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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