The diagram below shows the number of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The diagram below shows the
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of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
There are two major types of guests, excluding the total Use synonyms
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: of visitors staying on cruise ships and visitors staying on the island.
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of tourists who stayed on the cruise was quite low, fluctuating smoothly from 0.5% to 1% starting from 2010 to 2015. After 2015, the amount increased dramatically, peaking in 2017 and reaching 1.5% of people.
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of guests staying on the island was not grandiose. It has risen steeply in 2013, going up from 0.7% to 1.5%. Afterwards, the bar remained stable until 2015, suffering a slight fall to 1.3%. Fortunately, it returned to its peak in 2017, returning to the same maximum percentage.
Comparing both types of tourists, there will be the conclusion that the side of those who stay on the cruise has become quite popular, receiving more percentage than reef one. Talking about the total amount, there can be seen significant growth from 1% to 3.5% between 2010 and 2017.Use synonyms
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