you will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation. In your letter, say: why you are going to this country what kind of accommodation you want when you will arrive

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter with

regards

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find

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finding

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apply

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suitable accommodation

according to

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my needs in Abbotsford, Canada for one year. I have

taken

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admission

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University

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of Fraser Valley, Abbotsford, BC, Canada.

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why, I am looking for a place to stay near my university. I am afraid to tell you that I have several requirements for accommodation.

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I cannot live in sharing because I am vegetarian.

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Canadians eat meat.

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prefre

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prefer

single

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a single

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bedroom apartment over a room in

basement

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because I feel suffocated in

basement

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I have a dog too, who is going to come

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me.

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, it has to be

pet friendly

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, you must want to know about my arrival in Canada, which would be August 25th, 2024.

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, I am going to stay with my relatives till August 31st and I will be ready to move into

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place on 1st of September. Please let me know if you need any

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information.

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Your

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faithfully,

Samandeep

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Sandeep

Kaur

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Grammar

There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrases such as 'I have taken admission' which could be improved to 'I have been admitted' or 'I have enrolled in'.

Clarity

Consider refining phrases like 'I prefre single bedroom apartment over a room in basement' to 'I prefer a single bedroom apartment rather than a basement room'.

Structure

Your letter has a clear structure and each paragraph addresses a specific point, making it easy for the reader to follow.

Tone

The tone of your letter is suitable and respectful, and you have provided all the necessary details.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

174 words

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