The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. The area that produced the most is Greater China with 26% followed closely by Europe with 25%, which when both combined takes more than half of the total chart. The least number of making is by Africa with a measly 2%, South
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's at 4% twice the amount of Africa, the third and fourth regions which are South Asia and Japan has an exponentially bigger margin, with 8% and 16% respectively.
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, the difference between North
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and Japan is not very significant with only a 3% difference. Japan and Korea have similar amounts of production,
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to South
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and North
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with a difference of 21%.
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, we can observe that China has created the most passenger vehicles slightly beating Europe by 1%, with South
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, Africa, and South Asia being the 3 areas with the least production.
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