The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The first line graph illustrates the household electrical appliances percentage and the second line graph shows the number of housework per week.
To begin
with, there were 2 appliances which received an upward trend. Refrigerators started at 0% in 1920 and increased sharply to 100% in 1980 and remained constant till 2019, making it the fastest increase in household appliances. The vacuum cleaner's initial point was around 30% in 1920 before reaching 100% in 2000 and 2019. Meanwhile, washing machines began at 40% in 1920 and increased slightly to 73% in 2019. On the one hand, the number of
hours
of housework each week in households steadily decrease from 1920 at 50
hours
to 2019 at 10
hours
. In summary, there was a lot of improvement in the percentage of households from 1920 to 2019, except for the number of
hours
per household which had a slight decline from 1920 to 2019.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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