The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line charts represent the percentage of households' electrical appliances and the total number of hours allocated to do house chores from 1920 to 2019. In 1920, 30% of households had vacuum cleaners and 40% had washing machines.
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year no household used a refrigerator. 20 years later,
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number gradually increased as 55% of houses had refrigerators, half of them had vacuum cleaners, and 60% had washing machines. The percentage
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refrigerators and vacuum cleaners ownership kept on rising and had outreached 100% by 2019. Yet, washing machine usage had a slight drop of 10% in 1980.
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, it hit 75% of usage in 2019. Back in 1920, the amount of time spent doing chores was really high, which had a total average of 50 hours per week.
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, the time spent by households was slowly decreasing through the years and ended up at an average of 10 hours per week in 2019. In conclusion, there was a rise in using electrical appliances to do housework over a century.
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, the amount of time spent doing housework was decreasing throughout the years. when utilization of them was highly increasing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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