You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Male smokers

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Male smokers
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The bar chart represents the amount 18 years and older smoking men in seven nations,
as well as
, the global average for the same in 2000 and 2015
Overall
,in 2000
smokers
in 4 countries were less than the global average .
Whereas
by 2015 only
smokers
in Mexico and Australia were under the global average . Despite the total
number
of
smokers
declining all over the world ,in Egypt and Lebanon the
number
of
smokers
increased by 2015 In 2000, America had the highest
number
of
smokers
at more than 65% , immediately followed by Bangladesh at above 60% .
In addition
, Cuba was
also
higher than the global average . But Egypt, Lebanon ,Mexico and Australia remained below the global average By 2015 , even though the
number
of people smoking all over the globe had declined , only Mexico and Australia were less than that of the world average . Bangladesh had a significant decline in the
number
of
smokers
by more than 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words smokers, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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