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The table presents the information about the sales figures of books, novels and magazines in one local bookstore in the UK for January 2010.

The table presents the information about the sales figures of books, novels and magazines in one local bookstore in the UK for January 2010.
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The table presents
the
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information about the
sales
 figures of
books
,
novels
 and
magazines
 in one local bookstore in the UK for January 2010.
According to
 the
sales
 figure of non-members, comprising
sales
 to
books
,
novels
 and
magazines
, adults
brought
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bought
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magazines
 more than
other
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any other groups of customers which accounted for 1250
magazines
,
following
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followed
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 by students with 330
magazines
.
Although
 44
books
 were sold to students more than adults with 30
books
.
However
, no book was sold to seniors, they purchased 124
novels
 and 80
magazines
.
In addition
, Bookshop members bought more
books
 and
novels
 than non-members
customer
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customers
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, accounting for 70 and 942, respectively.
On the other hand
, 39
magazines
 were sold to bookshop members, which
were
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 fewer than any
types
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type
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 of
the
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customers. In conclusion, the total number of publications sold in January 2010 was 3134. On
this
 figure, 144 items were
books
 and 1291 items were
novels
.
Therefore
,
magazines
 accounted for the greatest number of
sales
at
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 1699.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, novels, magazines with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "presents" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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