In recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as factory farming and the use of technology to improve crops. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion

Industrialization has improved the farming sector in various aspects. In previous years, the action of farming has varied to add methods like the

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of

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to farm and the implementation of technology to improve crops. Few people think that these improvements are important,

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others view them as harmful and seek to go back to more ancient farming. These new technologies improve food quantity, and

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, and reduce

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' workload.

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, the technic used have been proven to be dangerous

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human

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and a decrease

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is noticeable. I am of the view, that present techniques are a danger to humanity and

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should be regulated. An increase in the production of food is the first aim of modern technologies. All

farmers

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work to produce goods of

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and quantity and

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adopt different strategies to fulfill their objectives.

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, almost all of them

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fertilizers to increase production and pesticides to produce

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products.

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, modern farming

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various

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like tractors to farm the soil and specific planes to plant seeds which reduces the workload stress of

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. Chemicals used are a danger for people's consumption. It has been proven that pesticides are harmful to our

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but it is still used to kill germs on crops growth for people to consume.

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, the

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of genetically modified

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can lead to

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disasters. New

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no longer need human resources, a single man can control the equipment for all the work to be done.

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, a reduction in employment

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would lead to an economic imbalance.

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, new technologies

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helped for a better production of goods. The improvements are aimed at adding the

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and quantity of food with the help of

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like tractors to reduce

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' workload.

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, all these have a negative impact on human

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with the

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of chemicals and

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, the

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of tractors has reduced the need for human resources. I believe that all these new approaches need to be excluded and a return to traditional farming will definitively be beneficial to preserve humanity.