In recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as factory farming and the use of technology to improve crops. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion

Industrialization has improved the farming sector in various aspects. In previous years, the action of farming has varied to add methods like the

use

of

machines

to farm and the implementation of technology to improve crops. Few people think that these improvements are important,

whereas

others view them as harmful and seek to go back to more ancient farming. These new technologies improve food quantity, and

quality

, and reduce

farmers

' workload.

However

, the technic used have been proven to be dangerous

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human

health

and a decrease

employment

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is noticeable. I am of the view, that present techniques are a danger to humanity and

therefore

should be regulated. An increase in the production of food is the first aim of modern technologies. All

farmers

work to produce goods of

quality

and quantity and

therefore

adopt different strategies to fulfill their objectives.

Firstly

, almost all of them

use

fertilizers to increase production and pesticides to produce

quality

products.

Secondly

, modern farming

use

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various

machines

like tractors to farm the soil and specific planes to plant seeds which reduces the workload stress of

farmers

. Chemicals used are a danger for people's consumption. It has been proven that pesticides are harmful to our

health

but it is still used to kill germs on crops growth for people to consume.

For example

, the

use

of genetically modified

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can lead to

health

disasters. New

machines

no longer need human resources, a single man can control the equipment for all the work to be done.

Consequently

, a reduction in employment

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would lead to an economic imbalance.

to sum up

, new technologies

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helped for a better production of goods. The improvements are aimed at adding the

quality

and quantity of food with the help of

machines

like tractors to reduce

farmers

' workload.

Nevertheless

, all these have a negative impact on human

health

with the

use

of chemicals and

additionally

, the

use

of tractors has reduced the need for human resources. I believe that all these new approaches need to be excluded and a return to traditional farming will definitively be beneficial to preserve humanity.