The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart given showed the participation
number
of adults in thousands
in two years: 1997 and 2017 from various major sports in an area.
It can be seen that Tennis has a
highest percentage both in 1997 and 2017 Change the article
the
while
Basketball showed the lowest percentage.
Tennis has shown a 50 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
number
of participant
in 1997 and its Fix the agreement mistake
participants
number
rose in 2017 to 55 thousands
. Following the data Change to singular
thousand
of
Tennis, there is Football and Rugby Change preposition
for
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
shown
almost similar Wrong verb form
show
number
. Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
While
Footbal has
around 30 Wrong verb form
had
thousands
in 1997, Rubgy Change to singular
thousand
also
shown
more than 30 Wrong verb form
showed
thousands
, approximately 32 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
in that year. Meanwhile, in 2017 Football Change to singular
thousand
shown
to 48 Wrong verb form
was shot
thousands
and Rugby almost reached 50 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
which was 49.
Some major sports Change to singular
thousand
also
have similar patterns are
Swimming and Golf. Swimming Verb problem
such as
shown
the same Add the auxiliary verb
showed
number
both in 1997 and 2017 while
Golf has minor differentiation, in 1997 reached 30 thousands
and in 2017 32 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
. The other sport is Cricket, Change to singular
thousand
it
Correct pronoun usage
which
Add a missing verb
has shown
shown
Wrong verb form
showed
decline
Correct article usage
a decline
during
20 years which was 1997 and 2017. In 1997 the Change preposition
between
number
of Cricket participant
Fix the agreement mistake
participants
shown
25 Verb problem
was
thousands
and declined to below 10 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
in 2017.Change to singular
thousand
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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