The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the changes in the
town
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of Stromer approximately during a 30-year period from the year 1995 to now.
Overall
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, in the past, the
town
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of Stromer preferred the countryside, containing many forests.
However
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, in contemporary times,
this
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town
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has developed into a metropolitan region, which has certain modern facilities,
such
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as an airport.
Initially
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, the
town
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of Stromer only had six locations in the year 1995, two forests and houses, a shop, and a massive farmland.
Subsequently
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, at present,
this
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area has a significant change, especially the
center
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centre
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of the
town
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.
Firstly
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, the region of left forest is reduced, implanted two shops and one school. At the same time, there is an airport located at the right and upward corner, which originates forest.
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, the size of farmland is cut down, roughly becoming one out of four. The other three-quarters areas are developed into three shops, four apartments, and a house.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • residential buildings
  • green spaces
  • commercial areas
  • shopping mall
  • parking facilities
  • river
  • marina
  • tourism
  • leisure activities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • roads
  • roundabout
  • access
  • industrial area
  • community center
  • town square
  • residents
  • social interaction
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