The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia,
The pie chart represents the proportion of international
tourists
from four distinct sectors to Australia, while
the table provides information about the average three main activities of those international visitors.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the pie chart that tourists
from Asia present the biggest number among the other categories. As for the table, most European tourists
stay in Australia, and the least are Asian tourists
.
Just over a third of the tourists
are from Europe. Additionally
, the proportion of visitors from the US is about half that of Asia, while
tourists
from other regions make up the smallest percentage at only 10%. According to
the table, European tourists
stay the longest in Australia, averaging 16 days, whereas
Asian visitors have the shortest stay, averaging only a week. Regarding accommodation, European and other regional tourists
prefer to stay in camps or caravans. In contrast
, Asian tourists
prefer 5-star hotels and American tourists
choose 4-star hotels.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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