You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Include a brief description of your business •Explain what you would like to have on the website •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear Gagan, Hope you're doing splendidly! I'm writing
this
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letter to request you to create a website for my business. As you know, I recently started a business
of
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artificial
jewelery
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jewellery
. I want to reach into
wider
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market so I need
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online site which can assist clients.
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, about my
business
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business,
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I sell
artifical
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artificial
rings, necklaces, earrings, and anklets. All the
jewelry
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is made
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traditional designs based on Indian culture. The
material
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of the items are of very good quality
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prices are
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very affordable.
Apart from
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this
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, I would like to build a website which must have all the pictures of
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, prices, and
quanity
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quantity
quality
.
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to
this
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, I want
to
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you to add no exchange policy guidelines and a feature to arrange appointments too.  I
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have some ideas to add a profile image which I clicked after wearing my best pieces on myself. I will send you those photos if you like
it
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please add
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same
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. Hopefully, you will help me. Looking forward
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your best services.
Yours
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friend, Waris
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity and to enhance coherence. This can make the letter easier to follow for the reader.
task achievement
Proofread the letter for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. This can help in improving the overall tone and readability.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion which makes it easier to follow.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly yet professional, suitable for requesting help from a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • website design
  • user-friendly
  • navigate
  • aesthetic
  • branding
  • content management system (CMS)
  • responsive design
  • high-quality images
  • graphic elements
  • visual appeal
  • e-commerce
  • product portfolio
  • search engine optimization (SEO)
  • interactive features
  • testimonials
  • call-to-action buttons
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