Studying the English language in an English speaking ountry is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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When we are thinking of the best
way
to learn a new
language
, most
people
will agree that
hands on
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experience will be a great boost
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your
skill
enhancement.
This
statement is somewhat agreeable to some degree, remembering there should be a lot of things to be considered as what experiences should be called
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"hands-on" experience. Let's take
English
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the English
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language
for example
. It is known that
English
is the international
language
, meaning that you should be fine to use
this
language
on whichever part of
continent
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you are.
While
it is easy to use
this
language
to communicate with anyone
especially
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from
the
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native
English speaking
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countries
, the problem lies
on
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non-
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non-English-speaking
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English
speaking
countries
as they have to learn
English
as their second
language
. Studying
English
language
as your second
language
gets easier these days as there are many resources that you can access easily anywhere from the internet. The theory part has been covered, now the practice should come hand in hand for the
skill
to be perfected. For
starter
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, you can try to practice speaking on your own. Whether it is a conversation by yourself,
or
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you can find a list of questions to be answered,
then
answer the questions on your own. After some time, you will wonder just how to rate your
skill
. Especially if you learn on your own, there's no easy
way
to rate your own
skill
.
This
is when you need
a
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help of other
people
. You can try
practice
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with other
people
, and if they understand you correctly
then
that could mean you have passable
skill
in speaking. You can find other
people
on
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the same country, or you can go to native
English
speaker
countries
in order for you to get a '
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'. Every
English speaking
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country has their own
way
of pronunciation, or you
also
might call it an accent. These experiences
is
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hard to obtain unless you go to
that
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those
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countries
, so
that is
why most
people
would agree that going abroad is the best
way
to learn a
language
.
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