The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart illustrates data, in percentages, on the manufacture of passenger
cars
in 10 countries, in 2015. It was shown that Greater China and Europe had the most
cars
manufactured at the time with Greater China leading with a 1% difference at 26%.
Moreover
, North
America
and Japan or Korea
also
had a significant number of passenger
cars
made at 19% and 16% respectively. The remaining percentages were split between South Asia, South
America
, and the Middle East or Africa, with South Asia having the greatest share at 8%. The remaining 4% and 2% of
cars
constructed were made in South
America
and the Middle East or Africa.
To conclude
, in 2015, out of the 10 countries, Greater China manufactured the most passenger
cars
, followed closely by Europe,
as well as
North
America
and Japan or Korea. The remaining percentages were distributed between South Asia, South
America
, and the Middle East or Africa in decreasing order.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, america with synonyms.
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