The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart gives information about people who

move

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from rural

areas

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to urban

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for 25 years, from 2000 to 2024 and the forecast until 2025 in three different countries. The most significant fact to emerge from the chart is that there are growth of societies number who choose urbanization from Irak,

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and

Russia

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over the period. Looking at the details, societies from

Iran

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Indonesia

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, and

Russia

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select

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going urban

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started in 2000 at around 8,10 and 15

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millions

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respectively.

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three countries increase gradually to 30 (

Russia

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) but

Iran

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transcends

Indonesia

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to 20

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Indonesia

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just has 18

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millions

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cominities who go to cities in 2005. After that, from 2010 to 2015

witness

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a significant increase

urbanization

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in urbanization

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number in

Russia

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and

Iran

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, with more than twice.

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Indonesian is roughly 21

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millions

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people.

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from 2020 to 2025,

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remains stable at 30

whereas

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Iran

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oversteps

Russia

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where

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is higher at around 10

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millions

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than

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Which

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means that

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dominates

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of people moving from rural to city

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

174 words

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