The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the top three
pineapple
production in the world in 2009 and 2019, it is measured in million. The pie chart displays
cost
details for each
pineapple
in 2019.
Overall
, countries ( A and C) their
pineapple
-producing increased over the entire period
while
Country
B
had
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decreased. Distribution and retail had the highest amount of the
cost
for every
pineapple
while
export
cost
was the lowest. In the first graph, In 2009
country
B had more than 4 metric
tonnes
millions more than other countries, but their production dropped to under 2 metric
tonnes
millions in 2019.
While
country
A
pineapple
produced
was
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under 2 metric
tonnes
millions
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million
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in the first year,
then
it increased to above 10 metric
tonnes
which is 10 times more than
country
C. In the second graph ,
distibution
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distribution
and retail had the most amount of
pineapple
cost
, with more than
third
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of the
cost
. And profit
had
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18% of
pineapple
cost
. And tax had 16% of the
cost
.
Moreover
, International
tranpsort
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transport
had 12%,
while
the
cost
of
imoprt
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import
licemces
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licences
,export
cost
,and
producer
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were
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the lowest.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapple, cost, country, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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